Hmmmm
It wasn't bad.The beginning of this sounded a lot like the end of the tapping sequence in eruption.Not to many mistakes but they are expected when you tap without getting a crap load of practice in.Overall good job and keep practicing.
I would suggest when you tap from now on get a bandana and a velcro(sp)strap roll up the bandana put it around the guitar neck lightly over the first fret so as to mute it then strap the velcro over the bandana to hold it in place.You then have a string dampener to mute the strings your not playing on.So long as you don't do any open fret tapping it really helps clean up the sound.Wow that was long.